Sorry man,
listen, i heard Paladin11286 and his song called "Chill Breeze (Demo)" and u stole it man...i give u about 1/3 credit, majoriy goes to Paladin11286! But, its great to hear that ur making songs again...i listened to ur other earlier songs...but sorry mate!
Listen for all of u NG users, go to this page, here lies the TRUE song...
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=979055&sub=4567
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that is a totally different song?? besides, i worked on this song years ago with Paladin11286 and im submitting my rendition of it since he chose to forget about it. i put it up on NG hoping it would get female vocals. and besides, chill breeze demo is nothing like this
Sorry mate....
Hey listen, any1 can put random crap, and call it a song! I only listen to the first 10 seconds and i can already tell u its crap!
I can give u some advice, but im into techno/Drumbs and beat, so i dont know?
Well, there is no beginning, its just starts, there has to be a introduction...including heavy metal!
The other part add more guitars, for example, put a acoustic guitar and then later on put the other guitars to make it sound better!
Now, im done with the review, and i really dont care if my advice is bull$hit to u, but it might help u...!
So good luck!!
that's basically what I did but whatever.
???....what in the hell??
Alright, first off...NICE DRUMS!! The meledoy is...meh... not good enough, just add more meledoys and ur good to go!
The next thing, sounds like ur jumping from Mario 2 Banjo-Kazoiee, nice but bring more of the banjo meledoy more...that shits awesome! Then put more than a messed up organ/piano...
Also, if u have FL Studios, put a smash/bang sound to go with the mario getting hit...sounds better that way.
Then, if this makes any sence to u, give it more life than the same ol loop...trust me, u wont like it if majority of ur songs are based off of loops and little change...!
Well, i said enough, keep up with the good work!!
Oh.. I've never played Banjo-Kazooie..
Ain't Bad!
Sounds close to the auctual song itself!! Nice job, but get rid of that loud pitch, it just doesn't sound right...other than that sounds fine! Great job!!
Thanks Mate ! Well, I 've put those "aliens" noises just to make this cover strange and a bit more original . Yes, I agree with you ... It doesn't sound so good because the other instruments volume is so low...when I'll have a new technological computer ( in two weeks ), maybe I 'll be able to fix it...if you want,I 'll do an other version of this cover...
...Well anyway...THANK YOU FOR THAT COOL REVIEW ! MY FRIEND ! It's a good thing some nice people like you apreciate my music !
nice...just as good as the auctual song itself?
So, tell me, o great one...did u create this song or did u stole it? Its too good to be created... I normally would have given u a 10 for originaly but every1 makes mario songs, so i gave u a five... dude that is very close to the auctual song itself...i cant stop but think, did u stole the song by using a Emulator and copied the song, then added the shakers? Very good question? Well, i'll hear a lame excuse from u anyway saying u "really" created it... so cya l8er
Listen, just because you can't recreate this song, it doesn't mean you should doubt the fact that others can. I started this from scratch, worked on the sound to make it sound like the classic NES music, and remade the entire song by what I remember hearing; that's right, FROM WHAT I REMEMBER HEARING. Just because you can't do the same doesn't mean you should lash out against someone else's work.
By the way, I looked at "your" Green Hill Zone remix, and Tarnish brought up (and I checked to confirm this) that the same exact song is on OC Remix by a different artist. Think before you speak, you fucking hypocrite.
Ok.......?
Ok, what the hell, during the first 10 seconds it sounds like the auctual mario song, and then u messed up. The song does not SLOW DOWN!!!!
It's called being original.
That was the worst shit i ever heard
Dude, that was bullshit. Pure and simple. Just stop making a fool out of urself, and quit making crap like that.
fine be an ass! god! and seing as this review came from you! the master of music (lol) i need not say more.
Nice, but it doesn't sound like avp
Hey i am one of the biggest avp fans, and sorry but that does not seem like avp to me. Its not to serious, u know the first part was awesome. Next time make it....more serious, man. Nice job, nice meleody and crap like that...
This is AVP, from the NES-game (Nintendo 8-bit)... Don't blame me for making a wrong tune then :P
sweet..!
Dude, this is nice! I just want to know what program did you use to create it??? Well, anyway nice job it ain't bad, but man u really need to tell me how you made that!!
I made it with: FL Studio ( www.flstudio.com , get the demo!), Sytrus, and also vanguard, my favorite VST (www.refx.de). And lots of practice :)
thanks for your review!
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