Woah, whats with the overdose on the bass?
Hey, im the first person to leave u a review....ok....listening to the song.....
Alright, nice lead in....(really it ain't bad) but its needs more thats all that i can say!
The second...HOLY CRAP MAN!!! Cut the boombass in half at least... thats where ur problem is, there is way too much bass! Fix that and thats probably the thing that needs attention.
Well, thats all that i can find that needs attention...give it some more tunes and melodies, ok?
Signed by ur friend, IGPX