Good job but it could use some work....
Nice Song.... but the intro....not so good. Try to make the intro less "retarded" (PLEASE FOR GOODNESS SAKES DO NOT TAKE IT OFFENSIVELY) and a little shorter. Ok? I mean, it has the old video game feel, so good job and good luck on your music!!
Signed by your friend, IGPX
(By the way, I have a brother who is a wee retarded so, yeah, don't take it personally)