???....what in the hell??
Alright, first off...NICE DRUMS!! The meledoy is...meh... not good enough, just add more meledoys and ur good to go!
The next thing, sounds like ur jumping from Mario 2 Banjo-Kazoiee, nice but bring more of the banjo meledoy more...that shits awesome! Then put more than a messed up organ/piano...
Also, if u have FL Studios, put a smash/bang sound to go with the mario getting hit...sounds better that way.
Then, if this makes any sence to u, give it more life than the same ol loop...trust me, u wont like it if majority of ur songs are based off of loops and little change...!
Well, i said enough, keep up with the good work!!