Its ok...its 2 short though!
Listen, whats his face is right, this is the same sounds and stuff that u hear when FL starts up...yes u may have changed it (hence the "5" for Originality) sounds almost as if u took some songs apart just to make this?!?!? Y is it short? Did you feel to lazy to finish it? (sounds like part of the monolothic filter music was put in here!) Well, i said my share, hoped u enjoyed my review!
Ok...?
Again, very spacey...do u have horrible speakers?? The drums??? Where the hell are they man??? I have a 7.1 speaker system with 2 subwofers...i dont hear the drums!!!! A song techno song NEEDS KICK@$$ bass! The stings and tech. leads were too insync ( i think thats how u say it) split them a bit make more meledoys!!!
Woah...what the fuck did you just say man? I don't even know what you're telling me to do...I must suck at this music thing...
Dude, its too spacy...!
Make the song less spacey man, it might sound better and put more drums than that!! Its really nice just make it less spacey and put more drums!!
I need to learn how to use drums huh? XD Will do...
Nice, u listened 2 my advice!!
NICE!! Listen, im glad that u listened to my advice...if not who the hell cares!! Nice Job of remaking the song!! It has a awesome intro, but the ending could use some work.... great job!!
Hah, I actually finished both of the tunes several years before uploading them to Newgrounds. Good advice, nonetheless!
Hey, nice song!
The reason i gave u a low originality is because every1 has that same sound effect, i hear it more and more other than that good job! Sounds like mario after a while...!
thanks but its all my song, so shouldnt originality be 10?
Hey, i like the true song....
I gave housemasta a 7, but gave 2/3 the credit 2 u. I told every1 that, who made it and where to find it...listen some1 stole my song too, from another website...so i know how u feel mate!
Sorry man,
listen, i heard Paladin11286 and his song called "Chill Breeze (Demo)" and u stole it man...i give u about 1/3 credit, majoriy goes to Paladin11286! But, its great to hear that ur making songs again...i listened to ur other earlier songs...but sorry mate!
Listen for all of u NG users, go to this page, here lies the TRUE song...
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=979055&sub=4567
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that is a totally different song?? besides, i worked on this song years ago with Paladin11286 and im submitting my rendition of it since he chose to forget about it. i put it up on NG hoping it would get female vocals. and besides, chill breeze demo is nothing like this
Nice, sounds a tad bit of Mario and Sonic!!
Nice intro...holy! Where did that guitar come from? And where did the intro music go, it was taken over from the drums!
Hey, listen, nice job, but u got some thigns to revise!
#1. Nice intro...its so nice and all, but then the harp comes along and scares the crap of the listener! Change the harp so that is slowly follows in and steadily increases in volume wise!
#2. Dude, the intro was nice...make ur drums not that high in volume wise, lower them a bit so that u can hear the intro, then when u get into the auctual song itself then u can increase the vol. on the drums!
#3. Make the song so that every piece comes to gether, it sounds as if u took the song a pasted them together...very choppy wise!
#4. When u have the harp and the pluck sound together..its nice but then the drums come and then u cant hear the harp and the pluck sound, so fix that, also music does not suddenly start and then stop...there has to be a follow through with the song...especially the drums! But good job, just fix the drums alright!!
Good job and good luck in ur music creating life!!
Sorry mate....
Hey listen, any1 can put random crap, and call it a song! I only listen to the first 10 seconds and i can already tell u its crap!
I can give u some advice, but im into techno/Drumbs and beat, so i dont know?
Well, there is no beginning, its just starts, there has to be a introduction...including heavy metal!
The other part add more guitars, for example, put a acoustic guitar and then later on put the other guitars to make it sound better!
Now, im done with the review, and i really dont care if my advice is bull$hit to u, but it might help u...!
So good luck!!
that's basically what I did but whatever.
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