It needs some fixin'
Nice build up....then u kinda killed it....
The weird pluck...no good! And try to add more variations to the song....and.....personally, it seems somewhat lifeless. Sure, its a song...but its the same ol' stuff! Yeah, so make some changes and try to get rid of the pluck and make it more (my personal opinion) aggressive!
But all in all, ain't bad for ur 2nd song!
Signed by your friend, IGPX